lovin this
lovin this
haha mushrooms crab with groovy tunes
Awesome :D
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Awesome
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00:00 - 00:12
This part is ok, you could add some ambience in the background and a tiny bit of reverb to the piano since it sounds pretty dry, other than that this part is pretty fine.
00:12 - 00:25
This part could be worked on. The several melodies clash with each other and none of them sound very distinctive, you could use a more varied palette of instruments and maybe not make several melodies play at once (i really couldn't explain very well what was wrong here, would be much easier to explain and show in person).
00:25 - 00:38
There's not much to say about this part. The drums sound a bit wonky, can't put my finger on exactly why...
00:38 - 00:51
Now we have finally come to the drop. First off the drums are too quiet and ambient, you'll probably want to turn the volume up on those. Secondly this part lacks alot of energy and the predrop/buildup didn't really pay off. And thirdly the melody is akward, and it repeats for the following 51 seconds...
00:51 - 01:29
So this part is a more full version of the last part but almost all of the other criticism applies here too.
01:29 - 01:42
This is a great break part, the only thing i could criticize is that there really wasn't very much energy to take a break from in the first place...
01:42 - 01:55
this would have worked better if you replaced the arpeggiating piano in with the basic chords, but the melody works pretty well.
01:55 - 02:08
The drum rhythm doesn't really fit in the scenario it's in until 02:05 (this may just be my personal taste though)
02:08 - 02:46
This part drags on for too long and is too repetitive, you could make it change a bit more than just adding strings at 02:20 and removing the bass at 02:34.
02:47 - 02:59
The synthesizer added here feels out of place, other than that, the criticism from the last part applies here too.
02:59 - 03:11
this sounds kinda cool actually
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Love the atmosphere in this
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